"The Blood Drip" by Brian Evenson
I read this in the December issue of Nightmare magazine. It was orginally published in Granta Magazine.
Two
men are lost in the woods and find a town. They approach the town and
just as they get near the walls they are attacked. Rocks are hurled at
them from up above and one of them, Nils, gets hit in the head and
drops. The other guy, Karsen, runs for his life leaving Nils laying next to the town wall. After Karsen finds safetey he reconsiders his actions.
Karsen goes back for Nils, but in the process is knocked out cold by a rock to the head. He wakes up to find his head covered in blood. Ahead of him he sees a big bloody spot where Nils should have been, but is nowhere to be seen. Karsen gets up and makes a run for it. He
heads into the forest and tries to head east. He eventually gets lost
and darkness is approaching. He uses one of his last 3 matches to start
a fire, and then falls asleep.
When karsen
wakes up the ground around him, and his hair, are on fire. After he
puts out the fire, he lays down and sleeps again. During his sleep he
has a dream. He has a dream that he is someone else, but still
himself. They are riding horses, and
the man just ahead of him is shot in the leg and losing mass amounts of
blood. It soon starts dripping off the horse in the shape of a snow
angel. When he awakes he finds his friend Nils in a tree dripping
blood, but seems to be alive. And he soon finds out that he is more
than just his friend, and knows more than he lets on.
This
story was interesting. I like how the writer introduced the
characters. You quickly sense what kind of man Karsen is and how he
feels about his friends. The writer does a great job of using
description and I could really see the blood dripping and sense what it
felt like.
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